My own unapologetic opinions on books and writing. I DO NOT accept review requests but only review books I choose to read and I don't post reviews on Amazon. I'm also persnickity about genre and plot.
The story is certainly original and keeping my interest, but the writing is driving me buggy. He uses partial sentences with a comma split. I hate that. I've thrown many new writer samples aside for it. I expected more of this one because a lot of people really like his books.
I note another of his, Heart Shaped Box, is on sale. Is it worth it I wonder?